Tuesday, July 21, 2009

Battling The Enemy

Brixie screamed once again as they came closer. Oh, how she wished that Latika would wake up! The snakes hissed and one of them tried to bite her. She jumped back just in time to miss the horrible teeth. Brixie wanted to run, but could not bring herself to leave Latika. Then she noticed Latika's sword in her hand. Brixie grabbed the sword and waved it in front of her. It was heavy and felt weird in her hand. The snakes backed off, but only for a little while. They once again closed in on her, hissing. Brixie thought that the hissing sounded odd for snakes. Brixie shivered as a loud roar behind her sounded. The snakes hissed again and slid into the bushes. Brixie spun around to see what roared. A lionish creature with wing's and six legs stood behind her. Brixie could not believe what she heard as the creature spoke." Thank you." It said in a deep voice." You have brought us hope."" Who are you?" Brixie asked. The creature sighed." I was once an enemy of your people. I was a snake like creature. I did not want fight you. Suddenly I became a lion, along with a few others. Because I turned to the good side." Brixie nodded, understanding. " Can you help my friend?" Brixie asked. The creature said nothing. Brixie looked pleadingly at the creature. The creature, taken by her look, stepped towards Latika. He stood very still. His mane glowed and Latika's cut on her forehead disappeared. Moaning she sat up. She looked at the creature, amazed. " It's alright." Brixie said. Latika just nodded." What is your name?" Brixie asked." I have no name." He replied." May I give you one?" The lion nodded. Brixie thought for a moment." May I call you Jeyan?" Jeyan nodded. Suddenly a loud thump behind them startled them. The robot was back. " Get on my back." He shouted." What about the bracelet?" Latika said, waking from her daze." There is a place were you can turn the robot off." Jeyan said crouching low on the ground. Latika hesitated, but not for long. They climbed on, and Jeyan took off. The robot reached for them, but Jeyan was to high in the air. Brixie could feel Jeyan's muscles vibrating underneath her." Hang on." He said and dove to the ground. But the robot was right underneath them! Brixie screamed as it reached out. Jeyan went up and roared as the robot almost grabbed his leg. The robot ran underneath them, not willing to let them escape. Brixie could see the bracelet on his finger's. The robot jumped up, almost getting Jeyan's wing. Then Brixie had an idea. When the robot jumped up again, she reached for his hand!" What are you doing?" Latika shouted. She pulled her back, but Brixie reached out again. Then she had it! The bracelet was in her finger's! The robot roared and suddenly grew taller! Frightened, Brixie handed the bracelet to Latika, which proved to be a sad mistake. The robot reached for Latika! Latika's scream faded away as the robot carried her away!" Nooo..." Brixie shouted...

13 comments:

  1. That's okay, it was really good! Wow, this story is getting REALLY interesting! I want to know what happens next!

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  2. Thank's Nim. Your right, this story is getting interesting

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  3. Megan, what happens next?! I'm curious!

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  4. It's your turn to write on the story. So...whenever you're ready...

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  5. OH NOEZ! THEY'RE ALL GONNA DIE!

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  6. How pessimistic. I was just being impatient, that's all. They're all alive...heh, I hope.

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  7. Megan, it's YOUR turn to write a story!!! (Trying not to sound impatient!)

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  8. MEEEEGGGGGGAAAAAANNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!
    Come on! Write!

    Hayley

    Sorry. I don't mean to sound IMPATIENT.

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  9. Ahemm....she should be DONE SOON, I HOPE.

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